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Photographer’s Note

Part of the barn on an old summer farm up in the mouintains. Think if this wall could tell it's story!? In the summer the barn is still used for cows and sheeps.

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Edwin (181) 2003-10-10 7:23

Beautiful colours and an informative shot Jack. I like all the details that can be read from the cottage. Posted a WS for you to adjust your post camera work slightly ;-)

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sarastro (588) 2003-10-10 8:09

Beautiful colors, beautiful lines. I like the way this picture almost looks morphed (at least to me it does) due to the slight crookedness of the logs and the disarrayed grass beneth.

But what is that bright almost cyan line at the top of the mountain? Too much sharpening?

cdewet (0) 2003-10-10 14:32

Jack, very strong lead-in and colour on the wood. Looks like a plank leaning against it on the RHS. It distracts from the impact of the wooden logs. It is something you can take away, if possible, before you shoot. A view more from the left would also give a slightly different perspective to the logs, bring more of the colour into the picture.

avigur_11 (21317) 2003-10-15 7:02