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  Farahani (28) 2016-11-06 0:46

Hi I like your framing. I would have, however, focused on the horsewoman's face rather that the horse since I gathered from your description that your subject is her. Regards

  Farahani (28) 2016-11-06 0:42

Hi Valdec A good composition; the building's placement and the road that leads to it drag the eye to your subject. However, turning the photo to B&W has rendered this photo a high key one and thus, now the darker tones, here the trees, are more dominant in the frame than the building. Also I feel that this picture needs to be straighten a few degrees. Best Regards

  Farahani (28) 2016-10-27 9:19

Hi Ken It is a good capture: the eyes are on the upper one third section of the photo, the body position and the head turning to the left. If I had been in your shoes, however, I would have leveled my camera with his eyes; this angle convey superiority. I would also have done the post processing different; maybe less clarity to keep the natural look and less blue.

Farahani (28) 2016-10-27 9:09

Hi Takero Brilliant photo; sharp focus on the subject while limiting the DoF brings attention to the front lady with traditional dress while showing the viewer that this was a festival of some sort exhibiting a certain tradition.

Farahani (28) 2016-10-24 15:10

Hi Ian It is a nice photo, beautifully layered to show depth. The composition is great with the diagonal skyline, the rock formations illuminated at the center and the complementary colors of the land and sky. However, you should have included the car more toward the center of the photo to be more noticeable; I did not see it until I read your description.

  Farahani (28) 2016-10-24 15:03

Hi Denis I like the composition; an example of the rule of third and the subject is quite interesting as well. In my opinion, however, you have made too much noise reduction so the formation has lost its detail and the white edging around it is quite apparent.