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Jakab 2009-10-06 11:33
Hello Roland,
the theme is interesting, the fresh breads (forms and colours both) are nice but somehow the picture is not appealing for me. It is not concentrated enough, the attention is split between the real theme and the (meaningless) background. It is the sharp, bright and from the point of view of the theme irelevant background that weakens the effect hidden in this photo.
Best whishes
Laszlo
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08-04-2010, 06:02 AM
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To Jakab: I agree...
The background is distracting, I should have used the largest aperture in order to try defocussing it a bit. With a wide angle lens that cannot go wider than f/4, this would not have been overly effective, but there was really no good reason for f/7. Not sure what I was thinking at the time...
Roland 
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