Appointment in Kyoto
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GATTACA 2005-01-19 15:50
Could have been a good picture, but some point disturbs me. So it's "just" a nice picture.
1/ The drain pipe on the right,
2/ The electric wire of the lamp and the left part of the picture that seems to unbalance it (nothing on the left / drainpipe, plants and bamboo on the right)
3/ The white thing on the roof top above the maiko's head.
I did a workshop trying to keep the mood of the picture. I hope you'll like it.
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01-20-2005, 01:54 AM
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To GATTACA: Appointment in Kyoto
Thank you for your workshop.
However, the most important thing in this photo is the mood. I feel your workhop has altered it significantly, taking out the mystery in the scene. The depth that I created by taking a long foreground has also disappeared because of the cropping. 
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01-20-2005, 03:39 AM
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Re: A GATTACA: Appointment in Kyoto
I knew you would have said so, this is why I said "I tried to keep the mood". Of course, as I cropped out a big part of your picture, the feeling of loneliness of the maiko disapeared.
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