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Emmie76
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jinju 2005-12-11 9:10
Hello,
I find this work interesting though ofcourse it can be improved. First, I like the simplicity of this shot and the graphism here. The diagonal stripe of bright sand against which the car appears. I also like the idea to cut the car. What can be improved is the excess light at the top. It sort of ruins the graphism of the shot in how it disturb the darkness. I did some workshops
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To jinju: Excess of light
