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Great jinju 2005-12-11 9:10

Hello,

I find this work interesting though ofcourse it can be improved. First, I like the simplicity of this shot and the graphism here. The diagonal stripe of bright sand against which the car appears. I also like the idea to cut the car. What can be improved is the excess light at the top. It sort of ruins the graphism of the shot in how it disturb the darkness. I did some workshops

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Old 12-11-2005, 04:24 PM
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Hello,
Thanks so much for the Workshop! It's exactly what I wanted to do but I didn't know how to proceed. That really improves the picture!
Thanks again!
Emma
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Old 12-11-2005, 04:28 PM
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not a problem. I thought it was a very good shot that needed just a bit of touch up. Glad you liked it.
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Old 12-11-2005, 11:17 PM
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This second WS in black and white is really good. Nice try! I really like it.
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