dragonslayero 2006-10-07 18:04
Hello Janos
Your intention for this shot is good, but I don't feel you have achieved it.
First of all, to narrow crop of the tower. The framing just makes the overall view so crowded and tight.
Also, what is it with all the grain?
Is this like a scanned negative of something, the grain is very obvious but I can also see soem dust.
Sorry, but this isn't quite up to max standards.
Odd Jarle
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10-08-2006, 04:08 AM
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To dragonslayero: .... some retouching at the base
Hi Dragonslayer-o!
No, this isn't a scanned negative. It's a original digital shot, but I cropped the tower narrow to emphasize its height (the other critic liked this.) I also had to eliminate a building at the base and I used some cloning. This is the problem, the dust you refer to. OK. I think I'll have to post the overall image without any retouching. Best, janos 
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