sunset at malacca mosque, a photo from Melaka, West

Photographer's Note

this picture i shoot when my 1st visiting this mosque at pulau malacca,the sunset its very beautiful.

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danielswalsh (13597) 2008-11-16 23:57

Hi Megat and Welcome to TrekEarth;

Not a bad shot to start you off here on TE, however with shots such as this with a very defined horizon, it's vital that they are level. The other thing is the watermark, it's very intrusive to the shot as it's badly placed and too big and bold. Ideally you want to make them small and descrete and maybe in a place where it would be difficult to remove. Where this one is placed, I could remove it in under 10 seconds.

All the best,
- Dan

happybuddha (25) 2008-11-17 0:42 [Comment]

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ls7902 (7380) 2008-11-17 4:41

Hello Megat,
Welcome to TE. Attractive colors & details ... is it HDR? Nice composition too with the rocks & beach leading down to the architectures. I agree with what Dan has to say. A critique like that will definitely jump start our learning process. Keep shooting and posting. Salam. Latiff.

adamchewts01 (862) 2008-11-17 18:35

Hi Megat,

Very good start! Correct me if I am wrong. This is a HDR right? Anyway, I agree with DAN on the leveling on the horizon and the text. The colour of the of the photo is good.

Just want to add a little more comment, the shadows and highlights has to be tune more as the borders between the buildings to the sky need more seemless effect.

Best regards and thank you for sharing.

Adam