Photographer's Note
Used by Hasselblad 500cm/120mm/f16/blackcard/Kodak E100VS film
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LaptaLarry (7) 2007-10-06 4:46
Sunsets are always good but an industrial background is not good and the black blob in the foreground could have been removed or the photo cropped.
LL
Tayon
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(1995) 2007-10-06 4:53
Hi RS
fantastic colors POV,DOF and sharpness.
I liked the great composition with the water mainly in the down side of the image, mainly in the wet sand..
well done.
Tayon/Taba
ben4321
(9875) 2007-10-06 5:18
I can't agree with LL - industrial landscapes make great subjects, especially when silhouetted against a sunset sky.
While the log does serve to anchor the foreground quite well, I don't like it's central position.
The slight tilt to the right is a bit of a distraction, and the colours seem quite over-saturated to me, even for a spectacular sunset like this. I'm also not too keen on the square boxy format - try keeping it more towards the classic 3:2 ratio, in landscape or portrait format.
Good attempt, but more attention to framing and less saturation needed in my opinion.
Cheers,
Ben
marine-coeur
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(1068) 2007-10-06 10:13 [Comment]
