The Catcher in the Rye, a photo from Primorsko-Goranska, Coast

Photographer's Note

The Catcher in the Rye

*I've caught them - in their bad intention!
*Nothing ruins calmness, like their uncompleted souls!
*They invade ours paradises, natural and pure oasis.
*Rabbits or any kind of animal life, they hunting...
*Unmaking nature on every step in their thirsty curse.
*Danger of the World is egoism - evil of blind spirit.
*Earth care for us, let's take care for it!
*Responsability is only choice of us! But they...
*See the first letters, you'll se who they really are!

LeOS

P.S. Cropped, contrast balanced, cleaned with NI...

Gand, Carma, karina ha contrassegnato questa nota come utile

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Gand (6) 2004-12-09 9:56

I like your composition Leos, good colors, good concept. Well seen and composed. Well done. Subject is very cool. I remember this book. :-)

P.S.
About your destination. Nia? I'm from Primorsko-Goranska State, but I newer hear for something like that! You must be mistaken.
o_O

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gemme (43) 2004-12-09 10:04

Well composed (or well, cropped), indeed. The field looks like gold...

jkneze (506) 2004-12-09 16:29

...a flight of fancy on a windswept field...
Learning to Fly, Pink Floyd, A momentary lapse of reason
It just reminds me of their video for that song with the American native Indian running through a field like this

robiuk (10807) 2004-12-09 17:37

I'm pleasantly surprised to see this one, Leos!
Somehow echoes the suggestion from my last critique (its part about composition).
Here's quite logical for them to be centered as being 'on top' of the 'gold peak'.
Beautiful colour of the field and sky, together with well chosen tight crop from the top!
Sjedi, 5!

Carma (2440) 2004-12-17 2:51

Just peep into your galery:-), and found nice pieces. This one grabb me with simple "duopartition" breaking by the man(s). Move of the grass (rye) is in slow motion, as the sky without any colour and clouds.
I marked your notice as useful, it is more poetic and take me to the time ....time:-)

Lijep pozdrav!

jpdeloof (2546) 2004-12-18 10:12

Cet avant plan est assez surprenant et très réussi.
Le cadrage met peut être un peu trop en évidence le premier plan mais il en vaut le mérite

karina (1109) 2005-01-12 8:21