untitled, a photo from Oslo, South

Photographer's Note

This picture is taken thruogh he window of the lokal train going from Ski to Oslo. It's looks over Oslofjorden, the waterway in to Oslo.

Cropped
Altered colour tempurature

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PrzemekN (140) 2006-08-22 7:14

Hello!
Your three photos are very nice. This one maybe the worst, but anyway - still good.
First - what I don't like composition much. I did a really small workshop with cropping - just to show what I mean would be better composition-wise.
For bad things - that's all.
Now - the good:
1. Unreal colours - may seem strange - but they do fit this scene like hell. I like it really much. The violets and blues give so much drama.
2. Feeling of movement - shouldn't be visible (fast shutter) but - this feeling is here - probably due to the reflection of sun on the tracks.
3. Nice, plastic refection of the sun in the fjord waters.
4. Sun rays - looks like Valhalla is there somewhere =).

That's all. I would give one point (for that composition) but still I like this image very much.
I hope you would like the outcome of my simple Workshop.

[workshop] [compare] +

stiginthedump (1833) 2006-09-05 5:18

Though the workshop is good, I would have gone for a vertical shot (or crop) including some more of the wires. It would have been a good man vs nature shot then.