urban style, a photo from Bucuresti, East

Photographer's Note

not my style...the urban one :D ...
I admire many photographers on this site and their styles so I try coppy some :D ,and i´m here to learn...so for i wait for any advices :)
wish you all a great day

rigoletto, isabela_sor, IgorDeleze, johannes68, steliosk, cozy, lilimih33, Dyerco, Dusklilly, HulyaTaskin, teutza ha contrassegnato questa nota come utile

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Paolo (41258) 2008-04-17 1:31

Hi Anellise, great one, brilliant, well saturated, excellent capture of the reflection on the subway window....a great stolen picture!
thanks, ciao

migzal (485) 2008-04-17 1:51

i like the distortion effect of this POV. the man in red seemed to know your taking this his shot from a reflection. moving your angle a bit to the right and get a full view of the window maybe consider in taking this shot.
Thanks for sharing.

rigoletto (34279) 2008-04-17 2:05

WoW!
Anes, this is a drastic and daring strike on the faces of your fans!
Metro shots are abundant enough to make a specific genre in photography, yet I appreciate a lot your guts to take and post such a photo. Experimenting, and changing of styles and trying different things always need courage. And you have that courage.
Sorry that i cannot give you any advices, because i have no idea about metro photography.
But i can say that i like the elements like the red hat, the reflections, the iron bar as a strong diagonal element.
Cheers,
Deniz

isabela_sor (47748) 2008-04-17 3:52 [Comment]

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IgorDeleze (585) 2008-04-17 3:56

Hello Anellise,
A different style today ...
The PP works well with this urban scenery.
Greetings.
Igor

johannes68 (3469) 2008-04-17 3:57

Hi Annelise,
stop being so modest! That´s a great photo, you thought about it before shooting, and gave it an interesting structure. The iron bar seperates the real world from the reflections - a clear, strong graphic element - and a few coloured spots attract attention. You should use the underground more frequently :D
Te pup, Johannes

mesutilgim (0) 2008-04-17 4:46

Hi dear Anellise,
Wonderfull pov ! Very good idea to use the reflections on the window of the train. Perfect daily life scene. The red hat of the sitting lady a great eyecatcher !
TFS and best regards
MESUT ILGIM

steliosk (4802) 2008-04-17 5:08

How does it feel like taking a picture among all these people?
don't you feel weird when they watch you? I'd by so shy, I'd like the earth open up and swallow me :D

I like the angle you chose here.
The rest of the PP is just a joy :)

Many Regards
Stelios

bwiti (402) 2008-04-17 9:16

Ce n'est peut-être pas ton style mais il est temps que cela le devienne... J'aime ce type de tilt urbain et la manière que tu as eu de privilégier le reflet ainsi que le chapeau flamboyant de la nymphe est particulièrement judicieux...
C'est très agréable de te voir faire des infidélités à ton amant le ciel...
A plus...

cozy (998) 2008-04-17 9:40

Hi Anellise,
This is a fantastic pic!! Great idea to shoot focusing more on the reflections! Composition, POV and framing are all stunning! I like the noise/grain (due to high ISO?). Very good sharpness considering the 1/10 shutter speed!!
Regards,
Costa.

dkmurphys (77972) 2008-04-17 9:58 [Comment]

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Anna-- (7801) 2008-04-17 13:01

Ciao Annelise,
great metropolitan image, excellent daily life scene.
Very good high contrasted shot and nice colors
Anna

lilimih33 (9918) 2008-04-17 15:14

Ciao Anes!
Interesanta si aceasta poza!
Punctul de vedere foarte bine ales, dar prelucrarea este ceea ce imi place cel mai mult, acest PP work, dar o sa ma prind si eu odata cum se face...
Pup!
Lili

Dyerco (10185) 2008-04-17 22:12

Hi Anellise
At my club we encourage people to try new styles because we have to complete different categories to earn out points. You've made a good start here. the problem as I see it is the clarity due to using a wide aperture and a slow shutter speed while the train was moving. Try bumping the ISO up to 800. You might get a little graininess but that could add to the atmosphere.
Phil

Nicou (193806) 2008-04-18 1:18

hello,

Quel effet, mangique, ces reflets dans la vitre, es personnage, cette dame avec son châpeua rouge pétant, très belle image fuynate, superbe.

Bravo et amitiés

Nicou

dkeus31 (27739) 2008-04-18 3:45

Hi (again) Anes,
so that's your new style(s) :)

well, even if I'm not expert in this style also, let's try to comment :)
the line makes a goo diagonal leading to the man who's looking at you; I first thought you could have delete him, but the the diagonal would not have an end, so it is better like this; maybe it could have started even more in the corner, that's not the point.
The red had is also a good catching point. and I personally like the two other people which we see reflected in the window, one looking obviously to the photograph; their red clothes reminding the red hat.
So, I would say a good one...

many hugs, didier

HulyaTaskin (640) 2008-04-19 2:10

Hello Anellise,
I think this is a very good try, and I also think you are being very honest by telling that you want to copy and try some new styles :)
I think this is a very good photo, the POV is creative.
I loved the reflections, of course the red hat !
Have a very nice weekend,
Hülya T.

teutza (10590) 2008-04-19 11:46

haha..ce faci fata?te dai p alte stiluri?seamana cu sebinho..imi place..si culorile..p care n-o sa le vezi vreodata in galbejeala aia d metrou!!!i-ai schimbat fatza..in bine..in mult mai bine:)
imi place!!!!
pupiiicii

bantonbuju (51815) 2008-04-19 23:46

hi an,
this is a creative approach to a classical metro-photography concept...
this car full of passengers looks so much "ordinary" - daily life has been reflected perfectly...
i also appreciate a lot the post processing - such strong contrasts and juicy colours fit my taste perfectly...
best wishes, j.

tomescuc (3291) 2008-04-21 21:05

salut,
felicitari, excelent POVul si reflectia. se simte pulsu; orasului.
CT

faubry (35447) 2008-04-22 23:29

buna Anes, mult creatie aici.. este artist stiu.imi place tu schimb stile. bravo
te pup
sunt a casa
francine

jone (3231) 2008-04-23 8:28 [Comment]